Author: Kate Constable
Genre: Fantasy, Young Adult
Publisher: Allen & Unwin
Publication date: May 4 2012
Paperback: 252 pages
From the author of the Chanters of Tremaris series comes a contemporary time travel fantasy, grounded in the landscape of Australia Beginning and ending, always the same, always now. The game, the story, the riddle, hiding and seeking. Crow comes from this place; this place comes from Crow. And Crow has work for you.
Sadie isn’t thrilled when her mother drags her from the city to live in the country town of Boort. But soon she starts making connections—with the country, with the past, with two boys, Lachie and Walter, and, most surprisingly, with the ever-present crows. When Sadie is tumbled back in time to view a terrible crime, she is pulled into a strange mystery. Can Sadie, Walter, and Lachie figure out a way to right old wrongs, or will they be condemned to repeat them? A fantasy ground in mythology, this novel has the backing of a full consultative process on the use of indigenous lore.
Stand alone or series: Stand alone
How did I get this book: Bought
Why did I read this book: I’ve had this book on my radar for a while for two reasons: 1) Time travel. 2) A fantasy novel based on Australian Aboriginal mythology. It sounded too good to be true. It was.
Review:
So today I was supposed to be reviewing The Stillness of Time Travel a self-published novel by A.J. Maddicott. I learnt about the book at Foyles (The Best Indie Bookstore in the UK), which is one of the few bricks and mortar bookstores to sell the book because they love it so much. I had to buy it there and then and the book had been sitting on my TBR for a while until I decided it was about time to read it. And the premise is pretty cool: young boy learns that he can travel in time (the idea is that many people can, in fact, time travel by slipping though time in the stillness of those near-sleeping moments) and then goes back to Victorian London where he will take part in the theft of the world’s most famous diamond, the Star of Banhavgarh.
The problem is, 200 pages (out of 412) into the book and nothing had really happened and I was just bored out of my mind. And you know when you are reading a book and you keep willing it to be good because you truly think there is potential there? It didn’t work (does it ever?). It got to a point where I had to decide whether I kept reading or tried something else and I decided to go with trying something else and I had Crown Country by Kate Constable, this other time travel book sitting on my (virtual) shelf. That book came highly recommended what with its credentials of winning the 2012 Children’s Book Council of Australia (CBCA) Book of the Year Award – Younger Readers and being shortlisted for the 2012 Adelaide Festival Awards for Literature Children’s literature award as well as the 2012 WA Premier’s Literary Award.
Big mistake. Because Crow Country made me angry and man, I should have stuck with boring. It would have been better for my blood pressure.
Basically, the book is a time-slip fantasy featuring a 13 year old white girl named Sadie whose mother decided to move to a small town called Boort, in Australia. She is not very happy about it but has no choice bla bla bla Contemporary YA clichéd set up we all know, etc. Nothing new to see here.
Now, Boort was once a territory occupied by the Yung Balung Clan of the Dja Dja Wurrung people, a native Aboriginal tribe. Waa the Crow, is one of their commanding totems, a hero and ancestor of the Dja Dja Wurrung people. Their land has been taken over by white people and their population decimated but for a remaining few.
In Crow Country, white protagonist Sadie finds the remains of a sacred circle of stones that used to belong to the Yung Balung Clan for thousands of years until it was taken over by a family of white farmers 150 years ago. When she steps into that stone circle, she learns that it’s Crow’s place and she is then able to understand what the crows that are so abundant in the place are saying. Crow tells her then that he has “work” for her to do. She then slips back in time into the body of an ancestor to witness the murder of an Aboriginal man named Jimmy Raven years and years ago, who was then buried in secret. He was killed by the white man who owned the piece of land where there were sacred remains of Aboriginal people which Jimmy was trying to protect. Sadie’s ancestor covered up the murder. The story progresses back and forth in time and Sadie learns that she must right the wrongs of the past and with the help of a young Aboriginal man called Walter she finds out that she needs to restore peace to the memory of Jimmy Raven. At the same time, in Real Time Australia, Sadie and her mother are first-hand witnesses of racism as her mother hooks up with childhood sweetheart David, an Aboriginal man (Walter’s uncle).
I can see the good intentions behind this story, I truly can. It depicts racism as a Bad Thing, it praises Integration and Friendship Among Races, it shows the complex racial relations in modern day Australia as well as the connections to the land that both Aboriginal and non-indigenous people share (although if you ask me, I’d say that thousands of years of connection trumps a couple of hundred years anytime but that’s just me). The elements of Aboriginal culture and spirituality seem to have been researched carefully as evidenced by the foreword provided by an Elder of the Yung Balug Clan praising the story as one of collaboration.
For me though, the problem is not how those good intentions and elements above were depicted because they seem to have been done so with respect and after careful research. The problem is how and why those elements where incorporated into the story. The problem is the focus of the story.
Because you see, it is all about the whites. This is a story in which a white heroine is chosen by the totem of an Aboriginal Clan to right wrongs of the past. Because for some reason she is the only one that can do it even though she is friends with an Aboriginal boy who is actually a descendant of the murdered man and someone who shares the same religious beliefs as Jimmy did. “To right wrongs of past” by the way, does not mean revealing that the person who murdered Jimmy Raven was a white man and a pillar of society – and tell everybody the truth about him. No, it means only finding out where Jimmy’s body rests so that they can mark his burial place and also find his sacred object and return it to his Clan.
Speaking of Jimmy, he is described by Sadie as a friendly man, “no one to be frightened of” with a “deep rolling laugh” and “too big for the small kitchen” and a religious man with “special” powers and special connections to the land. Ladies and gentleman, do I spot a Magical Negro? No, I actually spot TWO: because there is yet another secondary character that shows up only to impart her wisdom and help the white protagonist find her way.
So to recap: even though the main plot point of this story is to find out where this Aboriginal man is buried and rescue his sacred object in order to return it to his clan, all of the Aboriginal characters in the book are secondary appendixes to the White Saviour heroine’s Path of Glory. It is actually scary how oblivious this story is with regards to how it chooses to focus the story on the White People’s Plight. I mean, even the scenes where Sadie and her mother witness racism first-hand it is all about them, how it is hard for them, and how they are so special when they manage to help bridging the relationship between Blacks and whites in the novel.
The most glaring example of this is how Sadie’s mother rekindles her relationship with old sweetheart David and then proceeds to browbeat him into being more sociable. She insists he should go out with her to the pub (where people menacingly react to his very presence) and that he should work together with a guy who in the past, beat him up almost to death. He does not want to do any of those things but in the end, complies. There is also another secondary character, a white boy Sadie kind of fancies and who is not only a racist jerk but also at times, a seemingly dangerous one. But in the end, because the Aboriginal people opened themselves up to it, guided by the two main white characters, a magical and beautiful flower of friendship develops between them and everybody. Even though there is no actual character development whatsoever to make it even remotely believable that such obviously racist characters suddenly become enlightened and are surprise!Not Racists!
But you know, the book won awards and shit so I don’t know anything anymore.
Notable Quotes/ Parts:
“The Dreaming is always; forever… it’s always happening, and us mob, we’re part of it, all the time, everywhere, and every-when too.”.
Rating: 3 – Really Bad
Reading Next: LOADS OF HORROR books for Halloween Week.
36 Comments
Ana @ things mean a lot
October 25, 2012 at 5:50 am“The book won awards and shit so I don’t know anything anymore.”
I know the feeling :S I may need to reread and review A Certain Book that just won an award yesterday, and that by the sound of it has much in common with this one.
Ana
October 25, 2012 at 6:49 amHAHA I saw that yesterday and I thought of you.
Linda W
October 25, 2012 at 9:21 amOh dear. 🙁
Helen
October 25, 2012 at 11:09 amWhat book/award are you annoyed about? The suspense is killing me.
Sofie
October 25, 2012 at 11:30 amThanks for the review.
Someone mentioned this book as an example during a conversation about cultural appropriation. They said it was well researched and respectful. I added it to my TBR list, but now I’m taking it off.
Can I borrow this line? We can replace “book” with movie, music, etc. and it will works just fine. 😈
hapax
October 25, 2012 at 1:35 pmOh bother. I love any fantasy about crows and ravens, but Dances With Crows would annoy the spit out of me.
Jamie
October 25, 2012 at 2:58 pmMost of those aren’t even hard fixes. I can think of a half dozen things off the top of my head that would at least make it tolerable. What if, for example, Sadie had been in love with Walter and she was telling HIS story about discovering the truth of his people, you could even keep your narrator.
It really shows a profound, clueless, racism when a well-intentioned story is as insidiously NOT progressive as you describe this book. Really disappointing.
I’m frequently displeased with books “they” say are good, the people who hand out awards. honestly, I trust this blog more than big book people everywhere.
Kerry D.
October 25, 2012 at 9:09 pmDamn. I thought this one sounded good and wanted to read it, but not so sure now. There are too many other books to spend time on such a problematic one. At least I haven’t spent money on it yet.
Anonymous
June 20, 2013 at 7:10 pmsup peoples!!!!!!!8)
Anonymous
June 20, 2013 at 7:13 pmwat u doing:mrgreen:
Lisa
July 3, 2013 at 1:34 amI cannot tell you how happy I was to find this review! I have to TEACH this book to my class and even I struggle with reading it. The seemingly subconscious ridicule that is actually taking place is unbelievable. Sadly, this brings up a discussion I recently had in regards to these so-called awards…stick an aboriginal theme somewhere in there and you have a finalist/winner…this is simply denigrating the concept. I loved the story(concept) hated the writing and subliminal message that actually comes through…I would much rather have seen a half-caste protagonist than some “awakened” white heroine that comes to “understand” the complexities of another culture.
Now to keep my bias to myself!
kate
August 14, 2013 at 3:46 amthis book needs to be more interesting because it bores me the parts i have read
Owen
August 19, 2013 at 6:44 amUghhh…. I have do a “Literature Circles” Assignment on this filth. I tried, i really tried. I failed. HORRIBLE.
not impressed
November 26, 2013 at 10:01 pmI read your whole book review, until i got up to
“But you know, the book won awards and shit so I don’t know anything anymore”
-that is very unprofessional and rude
I will not use your websites again
not impressed
November 26, 2013 at 10:03 pmyou should take it down….
Anonymous
June 13, 2014 at 8:03 pmthis book is fucking shit
waa
June 26, 2014 at 6:10 amhi h8 this book
gae
August 4, 2014 at 4:07 amThanks for the review. I had to read it to help the girl I am tutoring who has to do it as a set text. I thought it was just me – I found it twee and cliched and the crow talk was AWFUL. It certainly fits ‘the pattern’ of recent award-winning YA books. My very well read 14 year old has decreed that most YA literature is off and has moved onto adult fiction, starting with ‘The Great Gatsby’. Won’t be running this one past her!
Ink
August 13, 2014 at 5:22 amI am rather irritated because I have to do chapter summaries for this book…
tired kid
September 3, 2014 at 1:44 amim pissed off cause I have to do an essay on this book and this is not helping
Person in year 7
July 22, 2015 at 8:27 amWhoa. Thanks for the review, and I agree. I have to take a damn quiz on this and its bugging me. I’m going to fail but hey, I can say I tried
the rarest pepe
August 1, 2015 at 6:06 ampossibly the best review i have ever read. honestly i would rather fuck a cactus then even glance at this godforsaken book.
anonymous
August 23, 2015 at 2:45 amHonestly I don’t get why everyone hates this book so much…. it wasn’t that bad. I think the whole point of Sadie being white is so that people can understand that the Aboriginal culture is not just out of bounds to white people. Also, I think the reason Walter was not chosen to be the character experiencing the time-slips because Sadie’s ancestor had more insight into what happened. And Sadie doesn’t want to cover up Jimmy Raven’s death, but she is forced to, otherwise Gerald Mortlock will kick them off their land. Sadie knows it is wrong, but she doesn’t really have much other choice. I think this book is getting too much hate.
poo
July 16, 2016 at 2:10 amhi
poo
July 16, 2016 at 2:12 amhate the book jk
Crow Country Hater
July 21, 2016 at 9:14 pmthis book sucks don’t read it
Crow Country Hater
July 21, 2016 at 9:16 pmI hate this book, it sucks. It doesn’t make sense, it’s racists, boring and confusing.
warmwill3
August 11, 2016 at 6:16 amit is racist and is bad confusing
Not Good.Worst book ever!
August 15, 2016 at 8:28 pmThis is the most BORING book.So BAD!
Anonymous
August 1, 2017 at 7:16 ami love crow country…
aaaannnnd Dogs!!!
Anonymous
August 1, 2017 at 7:23 amagree